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Silence themselves

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"When this heart is being frantic, I consoled myself with the smallest thing, however this is my life, attempting to smile despite being troubled heart"

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

It is pretty refreshing. I like the overall scheme of colors especially, and the lighting and shadows are done really quite brilliantly.

A couple of things:

Firstly, the plants in the foreground don't fit into the picture so well. Probably because of the quality of the stock, but it stands out from the picture.

Secondly, the hair of the girls. The two strands closer to the ears have different shades from the rest of the hair, and the strand closest to the ear seems a little stiff and odd.

Thirdly, I'm not sure what exactly it is you're trying to do with the leg lifted up. Are you trying to entwine it with plants? If so, I would suggest some shadows. As it is, it looks like the twigs were just placed in front of her foot.

Still, it's a great piece of work, well done!